A Sorry Attempt In Poem Dictation 2

In our house,

There is a mouse,
Who is no heavier than an ounce.

Bought a trap,
But it didn't snap,
While the bait was taken, oh crap.
Countless times,
We shall try,
While it escapes, in a blink of an eye.


Update:
Bravo! Bravo! All hail Rosie, the All-Powerful-Mouse-Catcher! *kowtows* Our mission have been successful! We have caught the mouse! But first, an explanation of the equipment of our All-Powerful-Mouse-Catcher, Rosie. She decided to use the simple-but-yet-effective instruments of a stick, rope and container to catch the offending mouse.

This method is like the hunters of old who will lay bait on the floor and a overhanging container, supported by the stick. A rope is then tied to the stick and pulled when the victim is eating the bait. Below is a picture of the Heavenly Rope and Hit-Dog-Stick (aka Da Gou Bang in Chinese >.<).
With such powerful tools in her hands, it is no wonder that she succeeded! And when the poor mouse was lured to the bait, All-Powerful-Mouse-Catcher Rosie swung into action!*Gasp!* With Reflexes-Like-Lightning and a Speed-As-Fast-As-Bullet, she pulled the rope and the mouse was captured! *Yay! Applause* Now, the offending mouse is placed into the Container-aka-Thousand-Storeys-High-Pagoda for her to reflect upon her past awful and hideous sins of scaring the All-Powerful-Mouse-Catcher Rosie, and eating our Food-aka-Heavenly-Peaches-and-Immortality-Pills.

Hah! Repent on your sins, you evil mouse! Prepare to endure Eternal-Torture-In-Hell and face the consequences of your horrendous actions!

Damn... I seriously need some sleep. >.<